Index: branches/fc13-dev/server/doc/install-fedora
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--- branches/fc13-dev/server/doc/install-fedora	(revision 1613)
+++ branches/fc13-dev/server/doc/install-fedora	(revision 1614)
@@ -2,5 +2,5 @@
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-1. Create the LVS partitions that the Scripts guest will use.
+1. Create the LVM partitions that the Scripts guest will use.
 
 Our classic setup is 50GB for the main, root partition (/) and
@@ -9,5 +9,5 @@
 and server-name-swap.
 
-Creating new LVS partitions is done with `lvcreate`:
+Creating new LVM partitions is done with `lvcreate`:
 
     # Example values:
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@
     stella $HOSTNAME
 
-Manually configure its IP, disabling IPv6 for now [XXX I don't know how
-to configure that].  The network mask is 16, and you can check
-'/etc/resolv.conf' if you don't remember what MIT's DNS servers are.
+Manually configure its IP, disabling IPv6 for now.  The network mask is
+16, and you can check '/etc/resolv.conf' if you don't remember what
+MIT's DNS servers are.
 
 It will then ask you for an installation image.  Continuing with our
@@ -68,5 +68,6 @@
 the VNC session on MITnet, so make sure you use a good password, and
 we should figure out to make it not do that].  Grab your favorite
-VNC client and login to $HOSTNAME:1
+VNC client and login to $HOSTNAME:1 over SSH from the internal SIPB
+network.
 
 5. Installation in VNC
@@ -76,5 +77,5 @@
 We don't have any exotic devices (we did that at the host level,
 recall), so you can use normal configuration.  The scripts-server Xen
-configuration will have automatically selected the LVS partitions you
+configuration will have automatically selected the LVM partitions you
 created in Step 1, and you want both of them.
 
@@ -91,5 +92,5 @@
 
 Use Scripts root password for a real install, and fake password
-otherwise. [XXX: Insecure over VNC? Argh!]
+otherwise.
 
 5.5 Formatting the disks
@@ -139,6 +140,5 @@
     xm create scripts-server machine_name=$SERVERNAME
 
-Use xm console to get a terminal, and proceed with the official install
-instructions.
+You should have password SSH logins now too:
 
-    xm console $SERVERNAME
+    ssh root@$SERVERNAME